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X9 The Android

aka X9 The Android

  • I live in Lima, Perú
  • I was born on April 6
  • My occupation is Movie Student
  • I am Male
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  • Category:Places is really a supercategory. Pages should be subcategorized.

    Also, categories should be listed alphabetically.

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  • You're scraping the barrel with page creation. There are plenty of pages that are a higher priority.

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  • About Gotham Harbor, and a belated one from Gotham Airport... Gotham has had a harbor all the way since "On Leather Wings". Don't make an article listing just one appearance and including just a badly written play by play of what happened in that one episode. Do some research. A location history section should first and foremost have a description and history about the location, and only then who punched who where.

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    • Tupka217 wrote: Rocker's has, afaik, only one appearance.

      Also, what you wrote isn't necessarily correct. I don't have the time to correct everything you write.

      Wll, I understand. Only the places that appear more than once need to be described completely. However, what I can put in Club 54 Level. I only know that J-Man's Jokerz attacked Terry and his classmates there, and as they never entered into the club, I didn't know how was the club's interior?

      Only the exterior....

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    • I removed the stuff from Club Level 54 because... well, seriously?

      "One night, while waiting in line to enter the club, Terry McGinnis along with his schoolmates and other people witnessed how a Jokerz gang arrived with their bikes at the club to cause trouble, starting with parking a motorcycle in Nelson Nash's car and hit Nash with a rubber chicken."

      That's one sentence, with so many pointless clauses any overall structure is lost.

      "However, when J-Man, the gang's leader, started to perform improper touching on McGinnis's grilfriend saying that it was only "tickles", McGinnis knocked J-Man against Nash's car and proceded to knock the other Jokerz out of their bikes."

      Again, poor composition.

      "However, when more Jokerz appeared, McGinnis stole one of their bikes and escaped from the club to be chased on the streets of Gotham City."

      Never start two sentences in a two with the same word. In poort style too. Though some style guides argue against it, "however" as an adverb can be used at the beginning of sentences. "However" as a conjunction should never be used to open a sentence. But you don't use it for either of those. You just throw it in. The sentences would work way better without "However". And split into two.

      Just because there's no interior or history to describe, doesn't mean any poorly written text is acceptable.

      Something along thes lines would be way better

      "The club [the topic of the page and only thing important here so lead with it] was the scene of a fight between Terry McGinnis and a group of Jokerz led by J-Man. The Jokerz had been harrassing guests waiting to get in, including Nelson Nash, Terry and his girlfriend Dana. As Terry soon found himself outnumbered, he was forced to flee the scene."

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  • Not everything needs a page. Especially not if it's non-canon stuff.

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    • Tupka217 wrote: Not everything needs a page. Especially not if it's non-canon stuff.

      But other articles like the Arkham videogames aren´t canonical and had pages? That aren't also canon.

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    • Stress the "had". I'm removing all of them. I'm keeping Teen Titans and Crisis on Two Earths for now, as some of that might need to be worked into other pages. But the rest can go. Honestly, I think most of the voice actor lists can be merged into one big one.

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  • From what you've added over the last days, I've had to revert or rewrite most of it, because it was either incorrect English or just incorrect.

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  • Please stop overlinking. There is no need to link every instance in an article. Just the first time that page is mentioned.

    Also, avoid starting two sentences with the same word. Especially when that word is "However".

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  • Please use the {{ep ref}} template when adding sources.

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  • Hello Tupka,

    For what reason the article "Batman: Asylum" was deleted. I had many sources.

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  • Hi, X9 The Android. The image you uploaded to our database does not specify its source or licensing.

    • Source: You need to indicate where the image was taken from by using a {{filebox}}. In case of screenshots, and if you didn't grab them yourself, you need to acknowledge the site/person who did it. Also, please add a description of the screencap;
    • Licensing: If you have not created this media yourself, then you need to indicate why it can be used here. For this, you need to include the proper image copyright designation on the license field of the {{filebox}}. If you believe the media falls under the fair use doctrine, then consider reading up on it, and then use the proper fair use license (screenshot).

    If you uploaded other media, consider checking whether you specified their source and licensing, too. You can find a list of files you have uploaded here.

    Note that it's your responsibility to properly credit the media you upload, and any unsourced and unlicensed image can be deleted if not correctly specified.

    Thank you.

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  • Hi, X9 The Android. The image you uploaded to our database does not specify its source or licensing.

    • Source: You need to indicate where the image was taken from by using a {{filebox}}. In case of screenshots, and if you didn't grab them yourself, you need to acknowledge the site/person who did it. Also, please add a description of the screencap;
    • Licensing: If you have not created this media yourself, then you need to indicate why it can be used here. For this, you need to include the proper image copyright designation on the license field of the {{filebox}}. If you believe the media falls under the fair use doctrine, then consider reading up on it, and then use the proper fair use license (screenshot).

    If you uploaded other media, consider checking whether you specified their source and licensing, too. You can find a list of files you have uploaded here.

    Note that it's your responsibility to properly credit the media you upload, and any unsourced and unlicensed image can be deleted if not correctly specified.

    Thank you.

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